Coronaria's Meadow
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Coronaria's Meadow
Coronaria Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:14 pm
Hi aaall~
Corona will post something originally created by Corona, here~
Coronaria's Little Life Story: Cooking Life Part 1......................................... Page 2
(is planning of making the part 2 and so on)
This first post wil be edited by time, coro coron~
~ Coro, coro, cororooooon~!
Corona will post something originally created by Corona, here~
Coronaria's Little Life Story: Cooking Life Part 1......................................... Page 2
(is planning of making the part 2 and so on)
This first post wil be edited by time, coro coron~
~ Coro, coro, cororooooon~!
Last edited by Coronaria on Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:47 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
phantom ciel Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:05 pm
your songs are not bad ^^
practice more and you can be better ^^
practice more and you can be better ^^
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Echo of Miru Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:08 pm
It's okay, since we aren't pros in singing, so it's just for fun 
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Coronaria Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:24 pm
Truuuue~!
Well... Corona's friend take soooo long time...
Corona guess Corona'll put the raw english lyric here~:
(and yes Corona use Eterna name here)
Eterna’s Lullaby ~Shining my light~
The lone moonlight
That shone softly atop the sky
I wonder why its light is so faint?
Whispering melodies
That I sang to you
“Good night, sweet dreams”
The thousand wishes inside it…
“Goodbye, meet you again later.”
We walk part ways,
Not knowing what is ahead us.
Will we meet again?
The warm moonlight
When I took a glance of it, atop the sky
I wonder why your name flashes in my mind?
Weaving melodies
That I sang to you
“Good night, I’m right beside you”
The hidden wishes inside it…
I will sing to you this lullaby
When we walk part ways,
This song shall always guide your way
Will you be back to my arms?
I’ll be the star
That guides your way home
I’ll be the moonlight
That carries you to your deep dreams
“My song shall reach you”
~ I shall sing for your sake ~
...
aaaw.... *blush*
Corona know it's not good. ><"
Corona don't want to make too-deep or too-hard song lyrics, for now.
Sing it? Me? Hmmm....
Corona will sing it only for Corona's special people~!
Corona is actually trying to learn how to compose songs, for this and many other songs~!
(But haaaaard...)
Other lyrics will go next, and if this song have been finished translated by Corona's friend.... maybe Corona will sing it~!
Surprising... but Corona is working on a dark hymn... Corona is in ze mood for it~
Well... Corona's friend take soooo long time...
Corona guess Corona'll put the raw english lyric here~:
(and yes Corona use Eterna name here)
Eterna’s Lullaby ~Shining my light~
The lone moonlight
That shone softly atop the sky
I wonder why its light is so faint?
Whispering melodies
That I sang to you
“Good night, sweet dreams”
The thousand wishes inside it…
“Goodbye, meet you again later.”
We walk part ways,
Not knowing what is ahead us.
Will we meet again?
The warm moonlight
When I took a glance of it, atop the sky
I wonder why your name flashes in my mind?
Weaving melodies
That I sang to you
“Good night, I’m right beside you”
The hidden wishes inside it…
I will sing to you this lullaby
When we walk part ways,
This song shall always guide your way
Will you be back to my arms?
I’ll be the star
That guides your way home
I’ll be the moonlight
That carries you to your deep dreams
“My song shall reach you”
~ I shall sing for your sake ~
------------- “Good night, sleep tight” -------------
...
aaaw.... *blush*
Corona know it's not good. ><"
Corona don't want to make too-deep or too-hard song lyrics, for now.
Sing it? Me? Hmmm....
Corona will sing it only for Corona's special people~!
Corona is actually trying to learn how to compose songs, for this and many other songs~!
(But haaaaard...)
Other lyrics will go next, and if this song have been finished translated by Corona's friend.... maybe Corona will sing it~!
Surprising... but Corona is working on a dark hymn... Corona is in ze mood for it~
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
phantom ciel Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:49 pm
*grin* would you sing it for me corona-chan? *hold corona's chin*
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- anyway, i want to give some input
imho, i think "glaring" doesn't suit there very well
glare= melotot
"ketika aku melotot"???
suggestion is "ketika aku melihat"
it sound more gentle
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Coronaria Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:00 pm
O////Ophantom ciel wrote:*grin* would you sing it for me corona-chan? *hold corona's chin*
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imho, i think "glaring" doesn't suit there very well
glare= melotot
"ketika aku melotot"???
suggestion is "ketika aku melihat"
it sound more gentle
Ummm... well, that is... o_o
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- Maybe... i was wishing to give a 'just a little look' thingy... jadi kayak cuma sekilas melihat... but maybe yes, you're right ^^;
Let's just see how my friend go with the translation~
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Aelisera Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:09 pm
Hmmm...Now that is a great song!
Keep up your good work!=)
Btw...Hehehehhee...Wonders what will happened next.
Keep up your good work!=)
Btw...Hehehehhee...Wonders what will happened next.
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
phantom ciel Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:13 pm
Coronaria wrote:O////Ophantom ciel wrote:*grin* would you sing it for me corona-chan? *hold corona's chin*
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imho, i think "glaring" doesn't suit there very well
glare= melotot
"ketika aku melotot"???
suggestion is "ketika aku melihat"
it sound more gentle
Ummm... well, that is... o_o
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Let's just see how my friend go with the translation~
would you sing for me? corona-chan *grin*
please? *smirk*
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- kalau melihat sekilas... bagaimana dengan "when i took a glance at it"?
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Coronaria Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:15 pm
Thank you~
To ^: Anooo... ummmm....
Change it to hymmnos? Humm... maybe Corona will insert a little hymmnos~ =D
To ^: Anooo... ummmm....
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Um.. well, edited...
but now Corona is confused between:
glare, sight, glimpse, or look
\"When I took a glimpse of it\" Sounds nice, but...
Yes, glance sounds nice~
Change it to hymmnos? Humm... maybe Corona will insert a little hymmnos~ =D
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Aelisera Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:16 pm
I think it's good all the way...
But the singer knows the best,right?=)
Change it to hymmnos sometime...Lolz.
But the singer knows the best,right?=)
Change it to hymmnos sometime...Lolz.
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phantom ciel Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:24 pm
eh? corona-chan is blushing? kawaii desu ne?? *grin*
hymmnos, sounds nice
hymmnos, sounds nice
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Aelisera Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:27 pm
Again,I told you,it's complex...It's not too complex if you are the master.I'm not,so,I can't change it.
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Coronaria Wed Dec 09, 2009 3:54 pm
I'm just adding a VERY LITTLE hymmnos, I said. ^^;;Shalvastalza wrote:Again,I told you,it's complex...It's not too complex if you are the master.I'm not,so,I can't change it.
But, oh... dammit... my friend cant translate it well... after she translated (which is not finished and i waited SOOO long <.<) the song lost some of it beautiful points or meaning or words.... =<
*bad mood*
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Coronaria Tue Dec 22, 2009 11:30 pm
*bump post* XDD
Sorry to double post~
Here is Corona's first try using Adobe Photoshop~:
Corona should add more... blingy on the shiny doughnut's strawberry cream...
and a little more... shading...
and... a moredeliciousinteresting background
T^T
Corona cant actually draw...
Sorry to double post~
Here is Corona's first try using Adobe Photoshop~:
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too lazy to resize! XD
Corona should add more... blingy on the shiny doughnut's strawberry cream...
and a little more... shading...
and... a more
T^T
Corona cant actually draw...
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Coronaria Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:29 pm
Thank you~ ^w^
and, oh~
Corona have made somescribblesdrawing of corona's OC sketches~:
And Corona is in the middle of making alove hymn~
Corona just dunno who will be in the liking to translate it. T^T
*tries to learn hymmnos*
and, oh~
Corona have made some
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- Silver Chain? Or as it seems. Silver Chain seems a lil bit older here though =S...
I drawed her just lately. =D
Celtia-chaaan~ as i first draw her~ (this is my old drawing back when i'm still a 7th grader XP)
And Corona is in the middle of making a
Corona just dunno who will be in the liking to translate it. T^T
*tries to learn hymmnos*
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
phantom ciel Wed Dec 30, 2009 8:39 am
that is nice, coro-chan *hug coro-chan from behind*
somehow when i see silver chain, it remind me of a character in special A
somehow when i see silver chain, it remind me of a character in special A
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Coronaria Wed Dec 30, 2009 6:31 pm
Thank you, corooon~~
Nyoron?
Corona did not know special A, coron~
Humm... Corona is thinking to make something else but is still confused, coron.
Maybe a story? =S
Nyoron?
Corona did not know special A, coron~
Humm... Corona is thinking to make something else but is still confused, coron.
Maybe a story? =S
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Aelisera Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:03 pm
Oh~ Your drawing are amazing~
Envy,nyuuu~~ XP
Well,keep up your good work!
Envy,nyuuu~~ XP
Well,keep up your good work!
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Coronaria Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:07 pm
Thank yooouuu~
But Corona is still a beginner, a rookie, a... a... a nothing. T^T
*edited poooost*
*cough*
Umm okay...
*takes a piece of narration paper*
One day, I remembered something that my friend have said to me.
Friend: Hah! You can't cook! You will just make the kitchen messy!
Me: *teary eyes* I caaaaan! T^T
Friend: See??? You messed up my super delicious onigiri+egg creation!
Me: No I didnt! T^T
Friend: Haa! and you didnt mix the eggs well!
Me: Yes I did! T^T
Friend: Blargh, a female that cant cook is not a good wife!
Me: *curls up in the corner* *sob sob sniffle sob*
Imagination:
Man: What are you doing? You call that a cooking?
Neighbors: That girl cant cook! pshaaaw! ahahaahaha!!!
Friend: How were you supposed to cook a special gift for a boy if you cant cook?
Lil bro: BLERGH ROTTEN FOOD! Sis is a bad cook~! Nye-nye-nye-nye-nyeeee~[/i]
(a little exaggerating there but what can I say? I'm only the narrator)
And so... I stood up from that corner, put my fist up and scream on the nearest cliff...
Me: I WILL PROVE I AM A GOOD COOK..! OOK...Ook... ook...
I took my recipe book and start the foodmadnessfrenzy....
*drumroll sounds*
*a witty cutesy music starts*
*Corona pops outta nowhere*
Hi theeere~! Welcome to Coronaria's Little Life Story - Cooking Life! (bleh, to rewrite all... wait, why didnt i just copy paste it? T^T)
Corona is going to show Corona's first try (ugh no not the very first) of cooking AWSUM and let's take a peek!
DRUMROLLS!!!
*drumroll*
TADAAAA~
Can you guess what it is?
Yes, you're right --- a fried rice!
... You do guess that its a fried rice, did you? =_= *brings knife*
Corona will name it... the [Simple Fried Rice]! Now its in your inventory, enjoy! =3 (what is this, an RPG? XD)
Let's have a taste of it! *Corona eats the fried rice*
OwO
Wooow, it's fantaaaastiiic! Everyone should try this!
*stuffs the fried rice into a random person's mouth*
see? That little boy is veerryyy happy~
*the random boy faints*
---- The Chef Says: (with Francais accent)
"Ze fried rice iz magnifico! Every little bits of ze rice contains a mix of eggs and iz verrryyy deliciouso! Top 5 stars!"
Narrator: How many did she pays you to say that?
Corona: *Stabs the narrator and hires a new one*
Well theeen, see you next time, stay tuuuune~! ^w^/
But Corona is still a beginner, a rookie, a... a... a nothing. T^T
*edited poooost*
*cough*
Umm okay...
*takes a piece of narration paper*
One day, I remembered something that my friend have said to me.
Friend: Hah! You can't cook! You will just make the kitchen messy!
Me: *teary eyes* I caaaaan! T^T
Friend: See??? You messed up my super delicious onigiri+egg creation!
Me: No I didnt! T^T
Friend: Haa! and you didnt mix the eggs well!
Me: Yes I did! T^T
Friend: Blargh, a female that cant cook is not a good wife!
Me: *curls up in the corner* *sob sob sniffle sob*
Imagination:
Man: What are you doing? You call that a cooking?
Neighbors: That girl cant cook! pshaaaw! ahahaahaha!!!
Friend: How were you supposed to cook a special gift for a boy if you cant cook?
Lil bro: BLERGH ROTTEN FOOD! Sis is a bad cook~! Nye-nye-nye-nye-nyeeee~[/i]
(a little exaggerating there but what can I say? I'm only the narrator)
And so... I stood up from that corner, put my fist up and scream on the nearest cliff...
Me: I WILL PROVE I AM A GOOD COOK..! OOK...Ook... ook...
I took my recipe book and start the food
*drumroll sounds*
*a witty cutesy music starts*
~ Coronaria's Little Life Story ---- Cooking Life: Part 1 ~
*Corona pops outta nowhere*
Hi theeere~! Welcome to Coronaria's Little Life Story - Cooking Life! (bleh, to rewrite all... wait, why didnt i just copy paste it? T^T)
Corona is going to show Corona's first try (ugh no not the very first) of cooking AWSUM and let's take a peek!
DRUMROLLS!!!
*drumroll*
TADAAAA~
- Spoiler:
- https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/i/dsc00124s.jpg/
Can you guess what it is?
Yes, you're right --- a fried rice!
... You do guess that its a fried rice, did you? =_= *brings knife*
Corona will name it... the [Simple Fried Rice]! Now its in your inventory, enjoy! =3 (what is this, an RPG? XD)
Let's have a taste of it! *Corona eats the fried rice*
OwO
Wooow, it's fantaaaastiiic! Everyone should try this!
*stuffs the fried rice into a random person's mouth*
see? That little boy is veerryyy happy~
*the random boy faints*
---- The Chef Says: (with Francais accent)
"Ze fried rice iz magnifico! Every little bits of ze rice contains a mix of eggs and iz verrryyy deliciouso! Top 5 stars!"
Narrator: How many did she pays you to say that?
Corona: *Stabs the narrator and hires a new one*
Well theeen, see you next time, stay tuuuune~! ^w^/
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Re: Coronaria's Meadow
Aelisera Wed Jan 06, 2010 5:51 pm
Okay~This is my comment...sorry if this comment makes you sad.
1:At first,you,as the narrator,feels very sad...Makes me *sob*Is your brother really that...bratty?
2:The story is funny~,lolz,try to make more,okay?
1:At first,you,as the narrator,feels very sad...Makes me *sob*Is your brother really that...bratty?
2:The story is funny~,lolz,try to make more,okay?
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Coronaria Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:24 pm
1. He is super bratty! T^TShalvastalza wrote:Okay~This is my comment...sorry if this comment makes you sad.
1:At first,you,as the narrator,feels very sad...Makes me *sob*Is your brother really that...bratty?
2:The story is funny~,lolz,try to make more,okay?
2. I will tryyy, thank yooouuu~ *huggle*
hmm... there is no colour here that suits shirinsei =S
shirinsei should be peach~ T^T
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